如何写好中考英语作文？

　　⑥省略句。如:

　　if so， victory will be ours.

　　you can make some changes wherever necessary.

　　⑦对比，这是中文中也常用的方法。如:

　　failure is not a crime， but failure to learn from failure is.

　　when i play， i feel excited， and after it i feel relaxed.

　　(二).通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

　　[原文]he stopped us half an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.

　　[修正]he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

　　[原文]we had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.

　　some told stories. some played chess.

　　[修正]after a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing，telling jokes and playing chess.